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[Dodge viper SRT-10 coupe]

Nice try

It is nice try, but there are a lot of modeling issues. You can see them in reflection of car, it is too much deformed. lights are too black, and some points lost because of missing things, like wheel texture and ets... Sorry, but it is 5/10 because how should I rate improoved version? try to compare to this one, and you will now why 5/10 http://robson.m3rlin.org/cars/wp-content/uploads/2008/02/dodge-viper-srt-2008-1.jpg

toshema responds:

Thanks, I go back keep retouching the work ^_^ !!! as for the link the car is a different model year then the one I was referencing from. Anyways, thanks for the review I value honesty.

[3D Piano]

Not bad

but It needs more work...

do better shadows, because they are way too sharp, and they sucks.

this scene has lot of potencial, keep up, and see my work with blender

what render do you use? I use V-Ray

FlipWillie responds:

*Sigh* Rub it in, will you?

As I mentioned, I lost the max file; so fixing anything now is impossible. I made this more than a year ago. Back then, my primary concern was modeling, and I didn't have much experience in anything else.

I have seen you work, and it is good. ;)

Now, I usually render with Mental Ray. Back then I probably just used the default scanline renderer that comes with max. I have used V-ray before, but I upgraded to 64-bit and haven't managed to get it back.

Thanks for your input.